All Comments on 'Aunt Kate'

Nice little start, now please continue.

But please continue.

This is going to be a hot story.

You can't let it go.

Just get an editor, because this deserves to be told.

Can't wait for the next installment!

looking forward to more keep on trucking love it so far tenbears43

There were grammar errors - sure, but I was able to enjoy the story in spite of them.

Keep it up, please ... waiting for part II.

I like where you are going with the story and I will wait on part two but good writing requires a good story line AND clean editing.

It's a great start. Nice plot line, good setup for future stories. Now, PLEASE get an editor. It reads like it was written by a 15 year old.

Man, you fuckers are ruthless

And you'd have had me shooting ropes.

Good 1st story, but you do need an editor.

Yes you need or can use an editor, but I read these storys for the fucking, I don't care about grammar, syntax, or spelling. I came to read this when you suggested it, before I read #2. So now I'm off to read #2. Liked this one, hope #2 is as good.

For the read.

It's a very good story. But the grammar and punctuation errors & omissions made it a difficult read...ultimately taking a lot away from what would have otherwise gotten 5 stars from me.

Great start! Pleeeease, find yourself an editor for future submissions, or least take a few minutes to proof read. You have a nice premise going.

It could go just about anywhere from here. We know so little about these people I am not even sure how we got where we are now.

Interesting story but try using commas. Way too many run on sentences and change of tense in this story.

Think it could have been better with a bunch of "wantons".

Good story. Sex with passion and respect.