All Comments on 'Aunt Meg Ch. 01'

Great start. Can’t wait for chapter 2

A great story! But you get "lie" and "lay" all goofed up. But I've never seen anyone get it right. "To lay" the past is "laid",

"To lie". the past is "lay", cruel but true. For the different meanings of these two words, go to a dictionary.

Great beginning, can't wait for chapter 2

Very hot!! Excellent story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Such a smooth erotic pace from beginning to end. The orgasms from build-up of frustration of a failed relationship to the taboo nephew was amazing.

Very well written in mechanics and content.

What a start! Anticipating on the next chapters

Great story. Cant wait for chapter two.

Wow.

What a fabulous story. I guess Casey is going to get into the action as well. And maybe Becky too!

Luck boy Wes....ha ha

Great stuff

writing in a two person narrative sucks

loved it, would like for the mother to get in on the fucking

I love the two person narrative. It takes a brilliant mind to follow it!

More more more, longer chapters and lots of them would be awesome

I hope that you are planning on writing more off this story.

I hope that you let his Mother in on what is going on and have her wanting in on it after she see his cock.

Awesome!

Waived... Really?

Get smart

vERY HOT BUT WHY IS SHE THERE? 5*

You need part two.

Awesome 5 stars waiting on next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great job! 5 stars. I usually don't like two person narrative, but youre doing an excellent job. Kudos!! Touché on defense of writing how you like to write your stories. Please don't let the negative commentors affect your creative flow. Excellent job for a well written HOT series... mmmmmm