by TMONY1
Well, that was an unexpectedly wild ride. I’ll ignore that this was quite the standard fare for the time being. My biggest question to the author is this:
As you started writing about Aunt Meg over a year ago, did you have any idea this would turn into a mommy story?
I could be wrong, but it’s fun to see when a story sometimes takes over the author’s, original intent.
Never into my mother, who had a sister 14 years younger (who became a model at 18), I had different expectations. My beautiful aunt was only seven years older (and far smarter than Meg), hence my initial interest.
Such tender words describing a beautiful mother/son moment. Amazing writing from beginning to end.
One of the best multi chapter stories on Literotica.
I feel kind of deflated. I think that there needs to be a part 5 and possibly 6. Does Meg move to California with her Girlfriend? Do Meg and Mom hook up together? Do Meg and Mom come to an agreement to share Brian while he attends community college? These are things that perverted minds need to know,
Awesome 5 stars but you need to write more of this story !! What happens when Meg comes home!!! Does Mother become pregnant!!! Do they live together as a threesome?? Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
More, more, please! I’d love to see this as a loving, wonderful harem foursome…!!!
You stories would all benefit greatly if you could get over the POV changes and just learn to write in the 3rd person. And no to the harem bullshit. harem stories are the bane of the I/T category.
Wasn’t thrilled with part one. Too much too fast and not realistic. Loved it when you built up the relationship with mom. Keep it going.
Would be nice if Meg and Casey walked on them fucking. Then everything will be on the open and they will all be naked in the hot tub and will have a foursome.
Liked a lot the story, all the chapters.
I too don't like to much the so called POV writing, but what the hell, you are a good story teller. So its ok.
As for the "harem bullshit": if you don't like, then move on. There are still so many stories without "harem".
And just one more thing: criticism is good, negative comments no. It disturbs me a lot.