All Comments on 'Aunt Meg Ch. 04'

by TMONY1

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great chapter.

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticabout 1 year ago

I loved it. Well done.

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601about 1 year ago

Well, that was an unexpectedly wild ride. I’ll ignore that this was quite the standard fare for the time being. My biggest question to the author is this:

As you started writing about Aunt Meg over a year ago, did you have any idea this would turn into a mommy story?

I could be wrong, but it’s fun to see when a story sometimes takes over the author’s, original intent.

Never into my mother, who had a sister 14 years younger (who became a model at 18), I had different expectations. My beautiful aunt was only seven years older (and far smarter than Meg), hence my initial interest.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 1 year ago
"Hungrily I devoured my sons mouth..." & "My son had awakened my dormant desires"

Such tender words describing a beautiful mother/son moment. Amazing writing from beginning to end.

One of the best multi chapter stories on Literotica.

Stayaway4USStayaway4USabout 1 year ago

I feel kind of deflated. I think that there needs to be a part 5 and possibly 6. Does Meg move to California with her Girlfriend? Do Meg and Mom hook up together? Do Meg and Mom come to an agreement to share Brian while he attends community college? These are things that perverted minds need to know,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Awesome 5 stars but you need to write more of this story !! What happens when Meg comes home!!! Does Mother become pregnant!!! Do they live together as a threesome?? Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bhill8671bhill8671about 1 year ago
Please,Please,Please

Let there be more!

Burcham8Burcham812 months ago

More, more, please! I’d love to see this as a loving, wonderful harem foursome…!!!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

You stories would all benefit greatly if you could get over the POV changes and just learn to write in the 3rd person. And no to the harem bullshit. harem stories are the bane of the I/T category.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wasn’t thrilled with part one. Too much too fast and not realistic. Loved it when you built up the relationship with mom. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

More

rodavrodav11 months ago

Would be nice if Meg and Casey walked on them fucking. Then everything will be on the open and they will all be naked in the hot tub and will have a foursome.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Liked a lot the story, all the chapters.

I too don't like to much the so called POV writing, but what the hell, you are a good story teller. So its ok.

As for the "harem bullshit": if you don't like, then move on. There are still so many stories without "harem".

And just one more thing: criticism is good, negative comments no. It disturbs me a lot.

dbsidedbside3 months ago

Pity the girls haven't return from Marco Island to join in the Taboo

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