All Comments on 'Aunt Needs Nephew's Assistance'

Great premise.

Good back story/buildup.

But when they got in the shower the eroticism ended.

Maybe he could have been more reluctant, and could have had difficulty getting hard. That would have opened up a whole raft of opportunities for her to get him hard...

She sure should have wanted/needed/asked for him to touch and play with her asshole before inserting his cock. Loosening up would have been desired before his big cock entered.

And maybe some lubrication?

And once his cock is in, he doesn't play with her tits? Or her pussy? Her clit?

And she doesn't reach back to play with his balls.

Three stars.

"Poop chute"? You lost me right there. Other than that, I'm sure you'll get some awesome reviews.

"Poop chute"? You lost me right there. Other than that, I'm sure you'll get some awesome reviews.

A gay anal story, YUK!

well I liked the build up ... the mechanics is bye the bye but the premise is great . so your critics don't like the shower scene .. its a story .. its made up so its their right to stop reading if their sensibilities are troubled ..

A little difficult to read through…some sentences didn’t seem to make sense.

And then there’s anal.

Liked the story otherwise. Agree with anon that there should be a little fore/after play. And lube is your friend in times like this.

Next chapter should be another lesson. Make them fall for each other, too.

Loved this story and I hope you continue to build more on her we should get married statement plus lots more training...

@First Anonymous

Thanks for the fair and constructive criticism. Yes, I should have definitely fleshed out that part of the story a bit. After all, good, hot, well-written sex scenes are one of the main things readers expect from stories on this site.

I'll definitely try my best to earn more stories from you next time.

@zoolicious

That's actually a bit of a shout out to another author on this site whom I've had a few pleasant conversations with. I can understand why you wouldn't like it, though.

@Second Anonymous

Ermm... there's anal in there, but gay it very much isn't.

@sheever

Thanks for the comment, I fully agree with you.

@Marvin2017

Thanks for the kind words and another bit of fair criticism.

@Time4Luv

I'm glad that you liked this story. Well, I'm not planning a sequel right now, but, as I always say, I never rule anything out.

An interesting premise, and exciting ... but the writing was so inadequate that at times it didn't make sense. A great idea, need to work on the narrative and writing quality.