by black saphire
Was an awesome story until now. Stopped reading when I seen where it was gong in this chapter. While I respect you as a very good writer, this saga is no longer meant for me.
Thanks for the first 17 chapters, I really enjoyed them.
I look forward to reading your other stories now.
Thanks for sharing your work!
You lost me. When you turned it rough, and got the other involved in the way that you did...I stopped reading. About a quarter of the way down page one. I glanced at the other pages to see if there was any way to reconnect with this and found it crass, and ugly, and not of interest any more.
So, I know that it's been a long time since you've added to this one - I suspect that might be just as well.
And, by the two comments that precede mine - it looks like we all agree, literally word-for-word.