by SabrinaGLangton
You are one of my favorite authors on Literotica. If those are your legs in the picture they look really nice! Any chance we get to see picture that shows more of you?
Thank you so much for commenting and reading... I am still so, so sorry it's so long, all my stories start out as little tiny ideas and then I fall in love with the characters and make an epic. I do have pictures I could send but no one is as beautiful as SilkeeSmooth.. Thank you again.
Love this story.
āI never played the field before, I didn't even know where the field was located, I hoped there was a parking lot.ā
What wonderfully descriptive wordsmithing, and John Klemmer is one of my favorite artists.
Great writing, good jazz, nice sex, and a happy ending, wonderful, just wonderfully.
ShelbyDawn57, thank you for reading. I love your stories. Just like my heroine I actually do have 23 Klemmer LPS too.
I love the story, especially the happy ending. Please keep writing lovely fantasies.
Really interesting writing !
Not too much of the insane sex BS.
Not too much family drama.
A story that draws you in at the beginning then holds your attention completely, to the end.
Thank you Sabrina
Thank you so much, Charlette, glad you liked it. This is one of my stories that I read over and over again. I kept the family drama really short I wanted to focus on Pelia and her friends. They were having too much fun to worry about anything else anyway... Thanks for reading...
I have to say this is a very well written story Sabrina which I very much enjoyed reading. Any thoughts on writing a follow up story? It would be interesting to see where Pelia's life takes her in the future. Keep up the excellent story telling.
Hugs,
Joanna
Thanks, Joanna, I always have trouble coming up with a convincing sequel. I think the ending is so perfect, I love that Pelia has such great friends, a great job, and great life, I would like to think life gets even better, ha. Hopefully, inspiration will hit. Thanks so much for reading...
Powerful story beautiful amazing your best work šš I'm greedy and want more but not needed THANK You SABRINA
Thanks, Anonymous, I love a good coming-of-age story. Plus this one had music, beer, and lots of heels, Oh, and of course a happy ending. Thanks for reading...