All Comments on 'Aunt Veronica Ch. 01'

oh love it. very good start. and the end with the teasing. hope to see more of that.

A great pace revealing a family rift.

So 50 Shades of Veronica? I like it. Have fun.

Is that it? Women shouldn't be doctors?

I hope there is more to this.

getting names and details straight is important. Is it Victoria or Veronica?

Not a fan. Whole thing felt more like a 12 year old boys fantasy than a coherent story.

Excellent story, well written, I like the various characters involved. This could be one Helluva horny family saga!

Gotta have more of this one - soon! 5*****

Oops, Veronica. Thanks. Changes submitted

When is the second part coming out?

Great start, looking forward to more.

Great story. Waiting for second part. Hope we will get it soon.

Builds really slow with some interesting erotic twists. Waiting with hope...

Really good story. Perhaps a little more reluctance in the young man would have been exciting.

What a great story! Loved the paragraph about Gary wearing a skirt, got a good laugh. Thanks for the read. 5⭐

The use of humor was excellent. The feeling of everything being in a whirlwind was palpable - demonstrating his confused state with just how shocking everything was. I felt like the grief might have been a bit more palpable, but people grieve at their own rates. Remarkable first chapter.