All Comments on 'Aunt Veronica Ch. 01'

The use of humor was excellent. The feeling of everything being in a whirlwind was palpable - demonstrating his confused state with just how shocking everything was. I felt like the grief might have been a bit more palpable, but people grieve at their own rates. Remarkable first chapter.

What a great story! Loved the paragraph about Gary wearing a skirt, got a good laugh. Thanks for the read. 5⭐

Really good story. Perhaps a little more reluctance in the young man would have been exciting.

Builds really slow with some interesting erotic twists. Waiting with hope...

Great story. Waiting for second part. Hope we will get it soon.

Great start, looking forward to more.

When is the second part coming out?

Oops, Veronica. Thanks. Changes submitted

Gotta have more of this one - soon! 5*****

Excellent story, well written, I like the various characters involved. This could be one Helluva horny family saga!

Not a fan. Whole thing felt more like a 12 year old boys fantasy than a coherent story.

getting names and details straight is important. Is it Victoria or Veronica?

Is that it? Women shouldn't be doctors?

I hope there is more to this.

So 50 Shades of Veronica? I like it. Have fun.

A great pace revealing a family rift.

oh love it. very good start. and the end with the teasing. hope to see more of that.