All Comments on 'Auntie Knows Best Pt. 05'

Wonderful story….

…going to be difficult to wait for the next instalment!!

Very good, can't wait for more....

It's all coming together! Both Samantha and Jayne are eager to fuck Jack (ok, Jayne's already fucking him) and it's about to happen. This has been an outstanding story so far, the next chapter will be Awesome! 5 Stars*

hi Jayne,

Loving the story and your writing (as usual).

Just one comment: the duelling/alternating first-person style of writing makes it a bit clunky. You could just have easily written it in third-person and it would flow better.

All the best, Andy

MORE, please!

Still don't like the point of reference thing, but this chapter was hot - period! 5*

Make up your mind is Jack 23 or 22

And the pot begins to boil.

Deliciously hot!

Love this story,,,can`t wait to read the next...,,,,,,,

Yes!!!