All Comments on 'Aurielle and the Prenup Ch. 01'

by Limnophile

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Anonymousover 2 years ago

For me, his story is weirdly disjointed and even stranger; reads like an instruction manual. This made it impossible for me to retain or even garner any connection with or interest in the characters.

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I can only publish about a third of my works here. You can read the rest at https://wolfpub.org/contributors/list_items.php?cid=10424 . . . I also highly recommend the stories written by my friend 'CreepyUnclePete' https://wolfpub.org/contributors/list_items.php?cid=10610

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