All Comments on 'Avenging Dad Ch. 01'

Your story has a fair warning to readers about content. The opening sentence does a very good job of establishing the back ground of son's life.

whats next

She was acting like a bitch,now she's going treated like one.

You can see only one chapter.

I can see at least a series of maybe five or so chapters.

Great concept, where permission is actually sort before any action taken.

Prefect.

Please consider much more than you were planning.

Congrats on a great story ---- 5 Stars !

Great opening chapter can't wait to see what they do with Amy.

He "avenges" his father by cuckolding him? His father doesn't have the balls to take his own wife the way she wants to be taken, but he can be a little pussy and watch as his son orders her to debase herself in front of him? What the hell?

Incoherent.

good read looks like amy wants some.,

Very interesting turn of events. A small part of it seemed a bit unbelievable.... but it didn't take away from the story. The teaser at the end was just mean to those of us reading. I have to believe there is more to reveal.

4 stars.

Cant wait to see how it goes from here doea Amy go for Daddy or does she follow Mother and go with Bryce.

I really enjoyed it and can't wait to read the final chapter.

I would have liked it best if the son 'stole' his mother from his father. He would have been fed up with his whimp father and bitch mother and took control of the family. With the OK from the father it's less exciting but steal hot.

Really good one. Please continue this with more chapters.

please give us some more chapters.

I like this and I can't wait hear about you fucking your sister?

I can't wait for the sequel, please don't take long.

Fucking great story loved reading it I can't wait for the rest plz do go on with this

You left it on a cliffhanger. I anticipate the next chapter!

Loved it. Though he should have left the collar and chain on and make her "bark" while Dad recorded it openly! Great story!

Why did you stop??? Wish I could give you a 10 one this chapter alone.

This is a great story. You must add more chapters. Dad and daughter. Son and sister. Even mother and daughter. All with Bryce running the show.

have some more of this fine tale.

This was Very GREAT writting!!!!

Please make another chapter!!!

please. ai expected the next of this story very soon

Loved it. Hope there is more

This was a great story, but it is not complete, Please write the second chapter. Where you left it hanging just begs for at least one more chapter maybe the sister cam become daddy;s new love intrest.

I normally read incest romance with brother/sister or daddy/daughter with no sharing. I don't unusually like dom either but this mother deserves it. I hope she gets her comeuppance.

I don't normally comment on stories though I read quite a lot. This is one of the best starts to a potentially amazing series I've read in quite some time. I see it's been several years since this one was written but just wanted to vote for a chapter 2

So yummy and so kinky too! Love it!

bumblegrum, you wrote a very good story, different and challenging. I enjoyed it and found it delightful.

I think that Amy should end up like her mother as her brothers slave but after that the girls should have to be nude anytime she is in the house or if they go out of town anytime they are in the room and have a lot more rules than just what we know of now and have the farther Fuck the daughter since he's not fuckin the mother but have the basically the be head of the house well after ex amount of time the farther submit to the son as well but only his power over the house he is more like a son living in his presents house then a submissive

A promising beginning. The degradation of mom could possibly be leveraged up a bit: Require her to drink her son's urine right from his penis, and have her clean and probe his anus with her tongue. What's more, mom should be forced to do the same to dad. Dad doesn't need to receive all the benefits that now belong to the son, but giving dad some overdue sexual servitude could heighten the woman's penance.

I might also be interested in a sequel bringing sister into the plot. Should she be a lover/present for dad, or perhaps a bitch l like her mother, also deserving of punishment by both son and father? In addition, perhaps mom should be forced to service other men and boys in the community.

I look forward to what you come up with.

It Seems Daddy has found his Replacement for Mommy Dearest. his lovely daughter. if Nothing else Maybe she can be Bryce's as well. Impregnating both for Humiliation purposes. They can't say who the father is w/o it reflecting on them. and Dad could find a Woman from work to take the Edge off.

YES, I'VE LEARNED WHAT SO MANY READERS OF THIS SHIT HAVE, JUMP OVER YOUR SHIT WRITING AND GET THE JEST OF THE CRAP STORY. DON'T YOU GET IT? IF SHE CHEATS, IF SHE IS A SLUT, DIVORCE HER, MAKE HER SUFFER, THROW HER OUT WITH THE BATHWATER, EXPOSE HER TO KIDS, FAMILY, EVERYONE. THE END!!!! YOU SICK FUCKS, ARE SICK FUCKS!!!

Gutless wonders who comment anonymously should get a life. Your ideas are not worth a pinch of poop!

Superb switch of the power dynamics in the household and you really need to get Amy involved as soon as possible/