All Comments on 'Avenging Infidelity of Husband'

As a story, very hot and enjoyable. But there were many typing errors. It seems you were writing in haste. At one place even the name of Satpal got changed to Tejpal. May be you were writing real story of Tejpal and it continued to haunt your mind even though you changed it in the story. But it was overall a good erotic story.

I was late in reading your story. But it was wonderfully hot and erotic. Yes, as told by another, there were many typing errors like "of" becoming "if" and the like. But from the view point of content and description it deserved 5***"*. Keep writing.