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Click hereI finished up what I needed to as far as closing up the lab and then went outside. Figuring it would be some sort of a joke, I did look down the street as Max suggested. I almost dropped my phone in shock.
On a large billboard down the street, the word "Revlon" was spelled out in the upper corner. Below the words were a bunch of lipstick tubes. Next to both of those, about 200 times bigger than real life, was Charlie's face.
Really great work. Many thanks for that marvelous fairy tale (isn't it a fairy tale ?).
Five stars.
PP
Other than what feels like over the top younger teenage speak, great. Truthfully the text and slang usage makes me think of freshman in high school at oldest, but that might just be me.
The bdsm scene was really damn well written, and I sincerely hope most characters we've been introduced to are kept around and not just one and done side characters.
I've read enough fiction on the Internet to know bad writing, good writing and writing so good that it's noticeable.
Your writing is very good. Noticeably good. You seem to be actually crafting a story. Thank you.