AVOX in France

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Peter, Martin's Dad, died a month after his son's murder. The weight of that horrific event took its toll on the old man. Peter's wife Millie lived another five years, and she made sure her husband's business and legacy continued. She sold the business to the employees making sure the company would flourish after she was gone.

Right after Martin's passing, Justine sold the house and moved into Martin's apartment, which gave her some closeness to the man who lost his life because of the events of that fateful weekend one year ago.

Justine turned over her dance business to Carmela, and spent the next five years as a recluse, mourning her loss and the actions that caused all the turmoil. She cursed Pierre for destroying her life twice, and the only time she smiled was when she learned of his death in prison.

In the end, Justine lost everything she loved and wanted because of her need to succeed. Had she just listened to Martin and stayed home, he would still be alive. Losing sight of what was truly important caused her a life full of regret and sorrow. There was no happy ending for anyone, only sorrow and pain. The only smile came to her when she learned how Pierre suffered over all those years, and died alone in prison.

"Love sometimes comes like a dream and leaves like a Nightmare"

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 22 hours ago

No winners here.

ImshakenImshaken2 days ago

Thankfully this is fiction. Otherwise Karma could provide a most unfortunate deliverance. Thanks for sharing your non uplifting story. :o) I apologize for only giving it 4 stars. It was well written but I'm so bummed...

Dennis26Dennis262 days ago

It is a shame more stories are not as entertaining as this one.

AnonymousAnonymous2 days ago

Actually, Pierre ruined her life 3x (unless I misread): before she knew her husband, his actions in France, & shooting him. I do wish Martin survived, but at least Cindy didn't have him in the usual car accident or dying from cancer or an unknown until too late STD. This story, while moving, didn't have the same "attack" to me as usual. Still, 4 stars. Bob

AnonymousAnonymous2 days ago

"What he did isn't your fault, and I'll try to explain things to Martin"

It was somewhat her fault. She skied past an avalanche warning sign. Hubris is a thing.

No one "deserves" to be roofied But preventing it is usually straightforward.

RustyReaderRustyReader14 days ago

Deep, heart breaking story....me thinks Martin should have survived

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

Pierre is not the only victim of hubris, just look a little to the left to find Justine. A successful person, as she was written to be, would not so casually go along with the stupid idea provided by Pierre and the half-wit studio acquiescing to his plan. She was smitten with her adeptness to overrule what she knew to be wrong, flying with the asshole on his own plane, then remarkably lodging with him in his hotel suite. She paid a high price; unfortunately Martin did as well. None of the three were likable, and in spite of Martin being selfishly in the right, his taking the law into his own hands and exacting his revenge cost him as well. Karma once again extracts her comeuppance in ways only this fine author understands on the surface. Great tale…woe is THEM.

LechemanLechemanabout 1 month ago

A beautifully written story with a sad ending.

26thNC26thNCabout 2 months ago

I don’t like the death of Martin, but Justine will never recover from what her cheating cost her. Pierre is feeding the worms in a prison cemetery.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

One of the most heartbreaking stories you have ever penned. Your talents shine through even with something this sad.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

5 stars on another great story . GW . Keep up the great work

Elias1Elias13 months ago

Okay this is my second comment which I think is a first for me but I read this again and upped it to five stars. One additional item... no current combination of drugs can make someone become an instant whore... they can knock someone out or lower barriers like alcohol but there are no Martian slut rays... a persons conscience still exists so consider that in future writings.

Ocker53Ocker533 months ago

The wife is going to France to sign a $5million deal and yet neither her or the movie company booked her a room instead she was expected to share a room? Yeah that’s believable but I still enjoyed it anyway⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Elias1Elias13 months ago

In response to the comment from Allnighter, what kind of loving wife goes on a private plain at the last minute with a lothario or anyone? Further, her loving husband asked her not to go twice!

AllNigherAllNigher3 months ago

If I had just stayed home and gave up this dream, none of this would have happened. I

... Wow... Just read another where the guy left for work, dumping his wife for an important meeting when they had an important event planned. The guy got so the sympathy there...I mean it was work, he's taking care of the family

It's shocking that the wife gets so much hate here. Yeah, she got busy, but damn .... I didn't see anything watching the level of here. Going to sometimes Suite may be questionable, but nevertheless she was drugged and he knew it.

I liked the story but didn't much like the treatment if the wife. Maybe she should have been written to be more sneaky... I didn't know.

onecuriousreaderonecuriousreader3 months ago

this story reminds me of that saying, that a man works to make money for his family, while a woman works to make money for herself. really makes me think of how a woman's money and success is like her clothes.. Soley working for her own benefit to make her look and feel good without bringing worth to the relationship, let alone the man, im not attacking women intentionally, just pointing out a thought that occurred during reading this well written story, what is a womans true motivation for working? some may say her saftey and insurance for her future, but thats the point im making, its her future not their future let alone his future, which society ingrains into men to to motivate them, to give his woman and children everything of himself and crush him when he doesnt. perhaps that's something to warn young sons about women, perhaps that's something to warn young daughters about themselves.

NicealloverNiceallover3 months ago

Justine was just a fool not recognizing Pierre’s destructive nature. She put herself in the position of being tricked into having sexual contact with him. Sharing the same bedroom was beyond foolish and just a stupid idea. It wouldn’t pass any husband’s sniff test. She was naive and failed to listen to her husband

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Why do skanks become arrogant, entitled and bitchy when there's another man in the picture and just before cheating on their husbands. It was than just taking a flight with Pierre. They were working together, attending public events as a couple, holding hands etc. She wasn't thinking of her husband then. Good riddance. Martin was stopped from making the same mistake twice.

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