All Comments on 'Awakened Ch. 03'

Absolutely brilliant, like living one of my fantasies!

Always wanted to be on such a train and experience this.

When young I became addicted like you, this better than any drugs!

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The Melyssa 'experience' has suddenly gone up a notch. What a wonderful chapter from start to finish. This writer has an amazing talent to describe in detail such an erotic story. Can't wait for chapter 4. Hopefully it wont be too long....please!!

Thanks guys, for the feedback and the encouragement!

Chapter 4 is awaiting approval! :-)

Scorching hot!

Tess (uk)

Good story. I love reading and finding out what goes on inside the female mind during times like these. A personal pet peeve, however, is that the term is "vocal cords" not chords, which is a group of notes played at the same time.

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Love your writing! Witty and fun use of language, nice character development and plot, and hot to boot.

My god. I feel like that guy.