All Comments on 'Awakening Ch. 03: Planned Punishment'

Deeper into the rabbit hole we go.

This is already promising to become my new favourite story. Great style of writing and a fantastic plot, can't wait for more!

Thanks both for your words, very encouraging. I’ll try to get the next chapter out a bit quicker than the last one. :-)

You have done an excellent job here with all three of your chapters. You are such an engaging writer and really talented. The intrigue has me hooked, and I very much look forward to reading more when you publish it here.