All Comments on 'Awakening Desire Pt. 01'

Nice build-up, I like the alternating points of view. Very sensual approach, the craving very convincing and the sense of urgency had me hooked. Keep it going...

Thank you very much Rainyday!

Hope there are more chapters to come

Keep going. Roll on chapter 2

O.K. this was good. I also love how the Indian woman kept bringing up how he has big white cock and was attracted to him as a big white guy. Indian women worship white guys

Bastard! - Your build up to this ending was great!

I also liked your descriptive style of giving the emotions of each protagonist a separate paragraph as the story went along.

Awesome story - hope there is a round 2 where he pushes her further and gets her to lick his yummy white asshole