by LustyLee77
Move this sick perverted cuckolding crap to FETISH - out of Loving Wives - perhaps they may like it more than we do. How are the scores or do you care?
Black Cock cuckolding then Lesbian cuckolding - jaded sorid sick and pitiful - perhaps you should get some help Lusie before its beyond possible!!!
im so sick of these idiots who cant enjoy a sexy story..loving wives does not equal wives who are monogamous. Its a play on words you dumbass...Loving wives = very 'loving' wives..ie: they like to fuck...
Jesus get a life you christian, red neck bullcrap artist! These are fantasies..duh!!!
I guess it might be too hard to restructure the categories at this point.
Ok story, but it went about twice as fast as it should have. Barely 2 senteces from his friends and he's suggesting it to his wife? Barely any convincing on her part. Don't let anyone get you down, people who continue to write can only get better.
situation: hard to believe - only been married 4 months, they should be a near honeymoon couple, involved mainly in the joy of each other - and this guy feels the NEED to share his wife for variation already? well, all kind are possible - but for me it is hard to believe.
In RL i wouldn't have much hope these two, longterm.
characters: they feel 2D to me, cardboard
writing: parts are wordy and longish, others seem to zip by. uneven.
Whats that old saying..... you can please some of the people some of the time..... geeze, get off it peolpe. Who cares if it's believeable or not. I don't read these stories and ask myself if it's real or not.
I enjoyed your story and can't wait to read more. I thought the first part was excellent. The second half could have been excellent, but it seemed rushed. Would of liked more detail, and more on Linda's thoughts and feelings.
So white women only get off on huge black dicks and lezbo a go go lmao.
What garbage in bad writing, contrived racism (the hatred of white males) and being clueless in seduction and pleasing a woman.
the Yuckers rating 00
WHY IS THIS SHIT SO INVASIVE IN THIS CATEGORY?
I really enjoyed your story! I think you are very talented & look forward to much more!!!
Fullfilled my fantasy baby! Every inch of my body felt it! Keep er rollen!
Okay, you guys. All together now. Let's all agree this is only a story, a damn good story but nevertheless a story not an actual happening. Can we all spell F a n t a s y.
another great story with a mixture of lesbain and voyeur thats good but i think you made a mistake in your spelling you have in the story with one of the girls saying fuck my arm wasnt it supposed to say fuck my (ass)? or (arse)?check the spelling .
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga
As a woman that was talked into the black lover scene AND one that had to be tricked into the girl on girl scene due to a sneaky husband and another couple, I would find this story more exciting and believable had it not developed almost overnight. We had been together for several years and many fantasies well developed over a period of time before even one of them was taken to fruition.
So my enjoyment of these stories is greatly enhanced by a certain believability factor. I think some people DO write fiction mostly based on their true experiences with some bit of exaggeration. Lynne in Ore
On the the next chapter if come back to it have Connie and Joyce have fmf threesome with the husband in the bed without Linda then let him have the other women in the story too in his wedding bed.