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All Comments on 'Awakening of Stella'

by Juicybrucey94

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pantographpantographabout 2 years ago

You might consider a proofreader to help iron out spelling glitches that make the story hard to follow.

Juicybrucey94Juicybrucey94about 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you! I had to reformat it about 5 times so I missed a bunch lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You said she was braless and yet he undid her bra. ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story we need more !!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very well written

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awful grammar and spelling. Learn to write properly.

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