All Comments on 'Award Winning Boobs Ch. 02'

This author's fragile ego interprets anything other than five star glowing praise as too harsh. Tough. This story was a miss. Put on your big boy undies and deal with it like an adult instead of whining in comments.

1* for author's passive-aggressive, whiny response in comments. Grow a thicker skin. If an author can't handle honest feedback, turn off comments,

To Mr. Anonymous of May 21: Thank you for your feedback. It does however seem just a tad harsh, at least to me. JB

I don't remember ever giving a story just one star, but this one deserves a zero. Unrealistic, dehumanizing, disgusting, neither lit or erotica, yes it sucks. One almost expected that Steve was next going to have all his friends pee in a bucket and ask her to drink it.

Chapter 3...? Please

Writing humor is very hard. This attempt failed, but thank you for your efforts.

She's fucking stupid. The 5 guys should have gangbanged her slutty carcass. 3 at a time. Steve's a fool.

Dragonrider