All Comments on 'Awesome Experience'

The grammar, sentence structure, and misspellings make this short story very difficult to read. If the author is more fluent in another language, I would suggest writing in his/her native language followed by utilizing a translation program ( Google Translate works great) to improve. Maybe it's appropriate for this first story to be in the "First Time" category.

This story seemed to start in the middle. I finally realized that she was going to 'work' in a whorehouse. Strange story.