All Comments on 'Awkward Pt. 03'

Bouncing from past to present to last tenses, sometimes even in the same sentence, is atrocious. You need to fire your editor. Even at free, you overpaid them for their services.

A bad editor is a bad as having none.

this was good, but i feel like you should focus more on the mom and siter, rather than the cousins, since i feel like the whole ellie thing was a little weird and forced this early on.

Great story. Please keep writing. Thanks.

I love this story so far and I like everybody but Janice she needs to chill maybe she could be more like ellie lol

don't put another male into this. Aunt, Mom, Janice and Ellie with Jason have sex altogether and all four pregs. It would be so awesome if it flows like that. :D

You grammar Nazi's need to put a cork in it. Especially when you've never posted a story. Just sayin....

Very good. Waiting for the next part.

Anonymous about "grammar nazi" comment: just because I've removed my publications from this site doesn't mean I've never published. In fact, one of my submissions was #21 on the all- time best rated incest stories on the site, and even if I hadn't outings popular stories doesn't make my comment wrong. Just because you fail to grasp the importance of proper grammar doesn't mean there aren't those of us that have higher standards (and education) than you do. The rules of grammar, when followed, facilitate read of reading and understanding. You are a prime example of why my writing is no longer available on this site. It's the pearls before swine thing.

You are doing better and better. I look very forward to seeing the next installment. Job well done.

Full blown harem repetition now. It could have been great, but you fell of the train tracks after part 1.

Still good so far 5 stars

Loving this series it sounds like a family fuck fest!!!!!!!!!!! 5 stars