All Comments on 'Awkward Pt. 04'

Look forward to where this is going next.

What!? Nooo! You can't end it here, the story isn't finished. Jason, Janice and their mother still need to return home. What will life be like for them when they get there? Janice said she was fully aware and in control but somehow it felt like she had no sense of shame or modesty anymore, which meant everyone else felt the same, will Janice and her mother acknowledge and talk each other about the events that took place? Will this affect their relationship? Will Jason discover how he gained this ability from the accident? Will he go on a public fuckfest, lol, with Janice and his mother on this adventure?

There's still so much potential for this story to go on. And I'm enjoying it! Don't. End. It. Here.

To Anonymous:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I might continue the story later on, but I have other ideas & stories I would like to explore at the moment.

Every guys fantasy. Full sexual control over women and can fuck all day every day. Time to wake up. Fun read but you need a proofreader.

I wouldn't want this story to end just yet either, there's more that can develop. It's great content.

Don't let the comments about editing or proof reading get you down, it's really not hard to get past any errors.

Looking forward to the next chapter or your next story!

yes please continue this one as there is so many ways you could move this forward and have fun doing it.

Yes, a great series and it would be fun to read more, either way thank you for publishing.

Welcome to la la land. Still good story 5 stars.

MAYBE MORE SHOUTING IN CAPS WILL MAKE IT MORE EXCITING? Not that? How about... oh, adding thirteen more sluts to his harem. Maybe that's the trick? Such a sad direction... a waste of the potential of a great potential left behind in the boredom of a harem.

Wow... Did this store go off the rails. First, stop typing "OMG"...NO one says that it loud. Adding more people I'd one thing but the veering of into some weird sci-fi thing was too much. I'm out.

Very nice so far 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

make l*ve :/

Naa.. it just got stupid! By the way you lay or layed down, not lie or lied down You tell a lie. You lied about it!!

Liking the story but it's getting a little weird 4 stars