All Comments on 'Azrael'

I could read through half of this but Its too much. This belongs in Erotic Horror.

I liked it its interesting wondering if your going to make it a series

I have to agree that this story while well written does go a bit beyond the fare of what is usually in this section. I think it does fall more under the per view of erotic horror. It definitely was not really to my taste.

Very good start, hope you keep writing.

I really enjoyed. I think it could be either catagory, he was nonhuman and this is an erotic horror so both work honestly, but its your story so you pick. Hope to see more from you. Thanks for the story.

I would love to read another story about Azrael!

I suppose these types of stories seem hotter than normal couple scenes to me, for some bizarre reason. But, your characters are fairly thought out & their personalities, but perhaps I'd like a bit more back-story with Azrael, is he a demon, an angel, a demi-god, a devil, or just a spirit, that wasn't made totally clear, dark angel? His name would suggest something biblical. Are there others like him, does he work alone, who were some of the others that came before Ellie,what made her more important than the others (other than her being able to endure more?). These aren't questions that need to be answered right away, just something that you may want to pursue in other stories. Your first story was good too, but this one was even better I think.

This is at least the 10th time I have read this YET I still do so. PLEASE write more to this series!!

LOVE the writing style. SO talented