All Comments on 'Baby Boy Blue'

HOT STORY!!!! Well done for your first attempt!

What a sexy ride! And what a complex, intricate way to write in the lingerie theme. All throughout, I had the distinct impression that the pair of panties is a third character in the boys' play. How they used the panties constantly. And the dirty talk? Phew. I totally get why he wants to be called a pretty boy. It's also nice that it has a happy ending or at least a hopeful one. I felt for Ash. Oh and the first person narrative totally works here. Oh and. Size difference? Yes please

Please continue these characters!