by LizbetDark
"Fuck juice"? Seriously? Adolescent dialogue from a grown ass man, to his daughter? come on, kid.
Good story. I didn’t like that he pulled out. He should have unloaded deep inside her. Also too bad that mom wasn’t watching through clenched eyes.
It was ok. I would've liked at least tiny bit of build up, so as to create a bit of sexual tension between the two.
Seriously, how did this score over a 2? It’s atrocious. The first paragraph alone was so bad that I fell asleep
Why did you choose anonymity? Now I can't go on your profile to maybe learn about how to properly write a story to keep people awake.
HOT ass fck!!, i really need a man NOW!! not in a relationship, but dymn I need some dick!!
Dad wasn't very gentle...
I didn't like that but it'd otherwise be fun playing with Whitley...3 stars