All Comments on 'Baby, I'm Going to Have a Baby Ch. 01'

is it his baby or not because in the beginning she was worried about it being someone elses? but then again this is just the first chapter so there is still more to come

Good writing and grammar. Maybe could have stream lined things a little bit. Bringing in the mother, the possibility of it not being his, and such wasn't exactly needed but I guess built it up that things weren't perfect in her life. Not that any of my work is perfect. I don't like to mark it 75% because the story is better than that but keep working and you can achieve better.

Pregnancy has always been one of my favorite topics especially when it's accidental but ends up being wanted. I really like how you made the boyfriend totally accept it right from the start

Way to leave your readers hanging.

I noted you had chapter one on your title and I agree with other comments saying it would be better if it were longer, also clear up the uncertainty of whose baby it is.

Maybe write chapter two.