All Comments on 'Baby, It's Cold Outside'

by EStaccato

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EmilyMillerEmilyMiller6 months ago

It goes without saying that this story is flattering to me in more than one way. Let me try to ignore that and be objective. Oh, fuck! Who am I trying to kid? Sometimes you find someone whose kinks so perfectly align with your own that it just pushes you both to the next level. I’ve written water sports occasionally. But E is the mistress of the genre. It’s just so beautifully realized and so erotic. My rating is five fingers out of five (maybe ten, if you are OK with both hands, hun) 😘. Em

Djmac1031Djmac10316 months ago

O...M...G

Emily really is a great bad influence, isn't she? Lol. I can just tell you two are gonna be trouble together.

Very hot. Very kinky. 5/5

steelyblue73steelyblue736 months ago

Courages writing, beautiful and raw, personal, yet broadly appealing in its honesty, as it thunderously, and rapidly spirals into the sizzling torrent of primal sex one would expect when these two powerful forces come together. 👏🏼 👏🏼 👏🏼

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Wowsa.....this story lit my fire and raised it up by a hundred degrees. Keep up the good work.

CelticTiger88CelticTiger886 months ago

Great story. Lots of build-up details and a nice ending.

anniebaby10anniebaby105 months ago

That story s so fucking hot.....I am so wet right now. I need to cum. and need something in my ass as well.

Thanks E

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Delightful, hot, and written with humor. A perfect story.

Will527Will5274 months ago

Naturally every guy loves a good girl-on-girl story, but this one.....!!!! WOW!!! You have nailed it, so perfectly described, including the pee drinking, OMG. I envy your partner(s).

DocTemplarDocTemplar4 months ago

So fun! Thanks for letting us “observe” this incredible night of fun. Will there be a sequel?

DocTemplarDocTemplar4 months ago

An incredible story; such a turn on! You’re a fantastic storyteller. Thanks for sharing. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

JJ82490JJ824903 months ago

Was introduced to your story/writing by another author. Amazing work - the build up, the chemistry. Everything was so well written. The topic is one of my favorites and you certainly did it justice. Thank you for writing.

AshleyLee12AshleyLee12about 2 months ago

Fucking love this story. SO hot and so well written. Bravo, girl

CupidCupidCupidCupidabout 1 month ago

First of all I would like to congratulate you, EStaccato, for writing a story that literally had everything in it! And secondly a big thank you to EmilyMiller for recommending this story. Thank you and a defo five stars from me!

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Hello naughty people! I'm here learning to write erotica so I can novelize and sell it. However, I think I'm just writing porn. <shrugs> While my work will probably appeal most to bisexual women, these stories are also for readers who like: plot, teasing, masturbation, fluids...