by Midnight Jam
There are a lot of mistakes that a 8 year old wouldn't do so if your under 18 STOP READING THIS AND STOP WRITING THIS
The story was good enough to make someone believe it really happened. It would have been better though if you would have used your 'spell & grammar check' before you posted it.
Compared to some of the stories on here this just isn't hot or sexy.
You guys are crazy (sick :-), so Literotica. He was a youngster, no? No wonder that he emptied himself inside her or else the story would not sound believable.
I hope that you don't expect us to believe of this, even if it is only imaginary, still, you cut it of way to o early, makes it seem you lost interest, or ran out of gas, in either case, way to short what a waste for you and your readers, my advice don't write anymore.
WAY TO FUCKING SHORT WAY TO FUCKING RETARDED IT WAS A HORRIBLE STORY U STUPID BITCH
If this is your first atempt next time use spell check. Also it's a little short but the premise isn't bad...good luck.
nice story for your first attempt. could've avoided cumming in her and not leave evidence. that would let you nail her again the next time she baby sat.