by Achuloh
Looks like a promising series, but the installments are far too short. There is not enough time for proper character or plot advancement. Hopefully future installments have longer chapters to enjoy
We just get into something: kissing, making out, dinner, phone texts, etc. then it just ends. Please combine some chapters and draw it out a little bit. It probably was a bit too soon for Phil to misplace the device. More could have been drawn out and Phil making out with Tiffany, and Eric making out with Phil's wife. Maybe the next day or two after Phil plays with the device he could misplace it. With the effects taking a couple of weeks or so to wear off, things could get dicey for awhile.
Can't wait for the next installment - threesome with the wife and babysitter?
@anonymous wanting the next instalment wanting a threesome.
I suspect that would only happen after Eric and Lizzy find the device and figure out what it does.