All Comments on 'Babysitter-Wife Swap Pt. 02'

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SlyghtSlyghtover 3 years ago
Looks promising

Looks like a promising series, but the installments are far too short. There is not enough time for proper character or plot advancement. Hopefully future installments have longer chapters to enjoy

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good start but way too short

We just get into something: kissing, making out, dinner, phone texts, etc. then it just ends. Please combine some chapters and draw it out a little bit. It probably was a bit too soon for Phil to misplace the device. More could have been drawn out and Phil making out with Tiffany, and Eric making out with Phil's wife. Maybe the next day or two after Phil plays with the device he could misplace it. With the effects taking a couple of weeks or so to wear off, things could get dicey for awhile.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep writing

Can't wait for the next installment - threesome with the wife and babysitter?

Kirk34Kirk34over 3 years ago
Great Story

Can't wait to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
5 months and no conclusion. Just a wet dreamm

The title says it all

greg50greg50over 2 years ago

@anonymous wanting the next instalment wanting a threesome.

I suspect that would only happen after Eric and Lizzy find the device and figure out what it does.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Part 3 please

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