All Comments on 'BabySitter's Bonus'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More of the same drivel

Please stop writing in the non con section you’re awful at it. It’s like the worst kind of soap opera tat. Your characters are flat and unconvincing but worst of all your writing is just bland.

sirhugssirhugsover 3 years ago
Appreciate the return to babysitter stories

though this one was a little rapey for my tastes, I liked Jenny, and really liked the clever ending.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 3 years ago

Would have been nice to have a little more reluctance. Glad she got compensated at the end though!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
To anonymous

If you think that this is drivel maybe you should grow a sack and write yourself

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