All Comments on 'Babysitting the Twins'

I enjoyed Free Period and I like this story too. You should keep writing. You are good and they are fun to read.

Once again, you've defied the usual stereotypes. I've seen a few stories that twist themselves in knots for "malicious compliance" with the age line, but it's immense credit to your writing that demure, tiny Chinese women don't feel like something's being counterfeited here. Not to mention, just like your first story, this -exudes- good vibes. If interracial loving sex with voluptuous women is your shtick, I ought to follow you properly.

Hi, just a quick little note to you after reading this wonderful story. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us. I will read more of your offerings looking for the same result. <m>

why can't I be so lucky to use my tongue lips and mouth on a juicy pussy

Very good early effort. You got a lot of narrative into a short story. You used adjectives a whole lot better than most erotic writers. My favorite, "My brown areolas spread 'lavishly' across my breasts." Just lovely. And Lily first demonstrating "biology", very sexy, nicely direct. Keep up the good work. Well done.

My bad. I meant adverbs. Hehe