All Comments on 'Back of the Bus'

This is a good story and is well written. I think by having it in this category some may skip reading it because they think there is no "real" action.

A top effort for a first story and I look forward to reading more from this author.

The story moves to quickly and does not really have much exhibitionism in it. Granted, the two actors are on a public bus and there is a mention of someone (at least) hearing their sexy activities, but nobody sees them. I sort of expected the two characters to reveal they knew each other and this was a story of fantasy role-play, but that did not happen. For it to be a case of a casual encounter, it would help to know the girl "planned" such an encounter ahead of time and accepted the various risks. Sorry to be so, 'technical' but the story has realism so my critical thinking does too.