All Comments on 'Back Over the Mountain'

Your fictional character should be locked up forever in a mental ward.

Hard to understand how this character was even thought up, Feel sad for your life.

Boston Red

It shows how caring people can be to others in need after a traumatic incident. It also shows how vile and selfish the same person can become with temptation, and a opportunity without much risk. I don't know if you intended it this way. It was interesting and arousing reading.

Thank you!

That was such a good story so hot, i loved the detail about it. Please carry on writing!

That was hot! It was also a bit creepy, but very well written. The way you described the scenes made me feel like I was right there. I definitely want to read more stories with that character.