All Comments on 'Back to Back Pt. 05'

I think that you are teasing us on purpose.. I'm frustrated as Artie after reading this chapter and probably even more erect and leaking. The description of his anal self-discovery took me back to my teen years and the location of my prostate. Well done and well played!!!! This is by far one of my favorite Literotica stories and you have become one of my favorite authors. Bravo!!!!

I think Artie’s exploration and inner monologue are hot as hell. So fricking hot. Worth the wait. That dream has to be a game changer. Is Miles being deliberately obtuse? He’s giving a voice to his jealousy without giving it a name. Certainly the end is near for whatshername, the girlfriend. So what am I thinking TurbulenceAhead? When one (or more, Conner) door closes …

Artie is the cutest thing ever. I really hope he doesn’t get hurt in all this. Love their progression, and hopefully Miles comes around.

I am very happy that nothing happened between Artie and Conner. Also, Miles’ days with Nat seem numbered too. Happy to see that these two continue to feel attracted to each other, but the car and mouse is getting tiresome. Let’s get a move on it.

@bluboynbama Thank you! Thank you! I see on your profile you've been on the site for a long time, so your words mean a lot to me. Thank you for enjoying!

@dsontn deliberate is... not quite the right word. The next chapter is going to delve into where he's at mentally and hopefully it'll make more sense. Thank you for your comments on this part and the last ones!

@thealphamale I'm happy you think so and I'm really glad you're enjoying. I'm a big fan of a ton of your work, Welcome to the Neighborhood is one of my all time favorites. Thank you for commenting!

@Anonymous "I am very happy that nothing..." Me too, Me too. I just couldn't find it in me to write Artie engaging with someone who isn't Miles. We're getting there! Miles just has to get his shit together. Thank you for commenting and please keep letting me know your thoughts!

I'm assuming they will eventually get together but when they do please don't let it be a cheating thing. Please oh please let Miles break up with his girlfriend or vice versa.

@Anonymous "I'm assuming they will..." I can neither confirm nor deny... Partially because I haven't written it yet but also I'm not giving anything away. Thank you for commenting! I have a few ideas and I'll keep your comment in mind.

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@sealandssd I appreciate it! New part shouldn't be much longer! It's a long one though, so no promises.

This story so far is making my heart swell so much, I wish I was in Artie’s position! The relationship they have (I know it’s had and going to have more challenges ahead) is just so pure and cute! Amazing writing, I hope the next chapter comes soon!

@Yoshirainbow96 thank you for your kind words, and I’m really glad you’re enjoying! It’s been a busy summer but I’m back to writing and should have it up in no time!

omfg this is so good holy shit

I've just recently started reading literotica and omfg, this is the best shit ever, your story makes me alternate between reading it while squirming and hugging my pillow and imagining someone like Miles hugging me

thank you so much for writing this!!!

@Arayama I’m so happy you’re enjoying! And I’m glad to be one of your first! Some authors on here you should definitely check out DWSimon, CarsonShepbard, reddirtwriter, VaRiverWriter, DAMackey, i could go on and on

@Anonymous "omfg this is so good holy shit" Thank you for your feedback! My ego appreciates it. Please feel free to let me know which specific parts of the story resonate with you!

@TurbulenceAhead

Thank you! I will check them out and also wait dutifully for anything you post :)

@Arayama Just uploaded part six, usually after that it’s up in a few days or less!

Love your story, keep it up : )

@Anonymous "Love your story..." Thank you and thank you for leaving a comment! I appreciate it. Part Six went up today and Part Seven should be up soon!

As I wait for the next chapter, I went back to re-read the first chapters of the series. And this time, I couldn’t ignore something that has been making my throat itch: After chapter 7 or 8, someone commented about Artie’s toxic behavior, but Miles has some major 🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩. The way he handles Artie is borderline grapey and his passive-aggressive temper tantrums are OTT. At some point, he needs to sit down and unpack his thoughts and feelings about Artie. Because, “I’m backed up” and “he’s my best friend” aren’t cutting it.

He needs to sit down with Artie to finally tell the truth. He might not be lying to Artie (directly), but he’s, most definitely, lying to himself. And if he keeps lying, he’ll mess around and lose Artie for good. At this point, Artie is the more emotionally mature person. And Miles is about to let Artie drown in their relationship. Hopefully, Miles will “man up” so they can have that much needed talk ASAP.

@Anonymous “As I wait for…” Chefs kiss. This analysis is spot on and I’ve been waiting for someone to say it! It genuinely brought me joy and pride to see someone understand the characters birthed in my brain so well.

I think the next chapter will address some of these things. It’s crunch time, that’s for sure.

I’d say this story doesn’t really have a direct antagonist. These guys are their own antagonists. To triumph in the end they’ll definitely both have to change.

At this point, it’s definitely more in Miles side of the court.

Thank you for enjoying enough to re-read and for your comment! I really enjoy reading through and responding to comments, but especially ones like this so thanks again! I hope to see you in the comments of the next chapter. Should be up soon!