All Comments on 'Back to School'

A fine first effort, Jenni. Well done! 5 stars!

This story felt nicely down to earth... no fairytale of the ideal sub meeting the ideal dom, but two flawed human beings having some very earnest carnal pleasure together.

It felt refreshing.

I would very much like to read more about these two.

Thank you very much for sharing!

wonderful start! Hope for continuation!

Very good I loved the way she played him and gave it her all

Very good!! Would love to have Keith and GF using and abusing her!!!

Wow, for a first story you made the whole writing thing look effortless. A brilliant vivid and realistic story. Thanks (gave it a 5).

Tess (uk)

1st time ????

Very realistic ☆☆☆☆☆

slut who's husband hopefully discovers who she really is and kicks her to the curb!

Oh my gosh, what a wonderful, delicious story! The attraction, emotion, guilt, feelings of pleasure put me right in there with her. Well written and I love how they both fell immediately into their given roles of Dom and sub. Well done Jenni, I hope there’s more coming!

erotic and delicious

Good Girl ... Slut

The scene where he is throat fucking her checks all my boxes *shudder* and that it was your first story makes it all the more impressive. <3 I have no critique but just food for thought. the next time they get a throating .. OOPS forgot this was public. send something I can respond two and I will share the "Arak one man wrecking crew recipe which replaces the tradition 5 cock setup and almost guarantee's better results predicated that the woman can have anal orgasms, combining the G asm and the clitoral.. and if don \properly and she is a true lover of the cock and being used , you should get a squirt and in rare cases just by bathing her throat in cum, she squirted. I would love to read this scene

I had been downgraded from slut to bitch - I laughed! Smashing story. I may have to come back to it again TY

piece of shit

Great story Jenni. I really enjoyed the premise that it was the dominance (as opposed to simply the sex) that she craved and how doubling down on the dominance was what eventually got her over the threshold to orgasm. The complexity of how people connect and how another man (or woman) may bring out something in you even if you have a satisfying marital sex life.

It's a good story well written. I have a problem with cheating stories, but that is my problem and does not detract from the quality of the work. To anonymous - who wrote so intellectually 'peice of shit' I can only presume you are talking about your critique, because you cannot be referring to the story I just read.

Thanks for writing, please don't stop.

KR

PM

Great dom/sub story, and it's your first! Please continue to write, ignore the Anon-holes who probably cheat, but don't want to read about the women who do.

Excellent story, beautifully told and well written! Thank you !

An excellent story, lil_jenni, in all respects.

What a shitty little MarySue kind of story.

Not my usual cup of tea but well written and erotic. 5*

That might explain why people go to all of the trouble to become admin.