All Comments on 'Back to the Ex'

That just made my dick hard.I hope they resolve their issues and firm a devoted, loving couple that lasts forever.

Oh, dysfunction can be fun!

I once had a long breakup with a goth girl. She’d come by to get her fix then tell me to fuck off.

Fun story. :)

Good but too short. A bit of affection or emotion would add quite a bit as well.

Funny, intriguing concept, good grasp of eroticism, I agree that there is ground for a longer tale, more detail, but this is fun.

Lovely

Raw, immediate, 100m sprint to the end, breathless and nearly satisfied. Special writing.

Absolutely funny at the end! I saw your Forum request and am leaving my welcome to Lit here. It's good, light, and funny, I'll be looking for more. I know you mentioned it was limited to 1,000 words on the other site, but this would have been more enjoyable, at least for me, if it had been done with internal dialogue exchanges perhaps - more personal and intimate. Yet, it was very good the way you presented them. 5*

Breakup sex at its best!

That reprise was great

Here is exactly how it happened for my wife, her ex and I:

Her final

moments with him.

Her former husband.

She said he needed

this penatrative closeness,

a final consoling moment

for a good bye.

We had been married

just that very day.

She needed

to share with me

proof their relationship

had only been about sex.

Proof our love and commitment was completely different.

Weeks, months later she consoled him over and over again asking me to show mercy

as his heart

was still broken

and deeply needful

of repair.

-FH