All Comments on 'Back-Up Dancer'

Brilliant idea

Keep Writing!

Boring. No sex, no build up, nothing worth coming back for.

very nice idea

Very good build up, hoping to see more

Looking forward...

the idea is good and it has potential but she doesn't struggle at all and there's no indication of whats actually influencing her thinking, its just kind of a dry "this then that" without any sex to spice it up

like i dont mean this to be discouraging because i like the idea and i like where its going but the execution needs work