All Comments on 'Backpacking Adventure'

A better ending would of been Noah taking 'Bobbie's' hot, tight boi cherry while he was blowing Tom and Joe. Then Tom and Joe could each enjoy Bobbie's new pussy. Maybe they spend another couple of days at the pickup camp, and the driver needs to be compensated for his time.

Hope you will continue that story, at least for another round. His first time with Noah. Break up with his girlfriend? Whats with Tom and Joe?

I really like how you build up your story and how you write.

Thanks

Great story and hot sex. Really enjoyed it. How about following up back at school with Noah & Bobby. Bobby promised Noah a fuck when they got back. cp

Fantastic story. Well written and a captivating story line. I was hooked and love the progression between Noah and Bobbie, and then Bobbie blowing Tom and Joe was just the exquisite icing on the cake. I'm so jealous of Bobbie, and I can't wait for chapter 2.

Heavenly, especially since I am Bobby, I love oral, and the taste of cum (non smokers). Well written as well, no egregious errors in spelling or grammar.