All Comments on 'Backyard Fun'

You have produced a good first story--I'm referring to your story list--and I happen to find (and write) stories about excretion to be exciting. I thought you captured your character's feelings as she prepared to do her business in her backyard. The description of her actual release of her bodily products was well done, too. I do hope you continue this story and have her either intentionally or unintentionally observed while she is squatting to pee or poop.

I love the character design and the full on description of what she was doing as she was doing it! Would love to see her get caught in the act! Hope to see more of your work soon!