All Comments on 'Backyard Pool Ch. 02'

Followed you for next installment. Awesome story. Lose the magazine. Just let them figure it out.

Super sexy— like all the exploring of eac other/ more please!

I love that this is taking time to get to finale. Too often these stories end up in full sex after 5 or 6 paragraphs

Can’t wait for more of this story!

Holy sh**!!!!! You write very well/descriptive. So much better than they fu**** and then done. I cannot wait to see what happens next!

I am finding that a great deal of your dialog should have been placed into narrative instead. The effect that you're currently achieving isn't very realistic. Honestly, this feels a lot like it was written by a teenager.

I'll stick around for at least one more chapter. I want to see if Amy and Ron get busted because they fell asleep together. That's a decent hook. 3/5

Erotic and Clinical

Brother and Sister sharing themselves

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Love the story but I hope it continues

Want more . much more . please , What about the parents ?

Great story please continue!!

Can’t wait till episode 3

Great story but I think it is from your past. I also had a similar time in the late 60s with my younger sister. She found our older brothers playboy and asked me to show her my thing as she called it. Show and tell turned into wonderful orgasims for both of us. Eight years later she still loved taking my penis and sucking my cum out while I still love to lick her to organism. And yes we are married to other people. 5 stars for you and us.

Holy Hotness. Great story.

Wow

An enjoyable storyline for sure BUT the dialogue is like the script of an infomercial. Read it out loud and see if anyone would actually speak like that in the middle of sex.