All Comments on 'Backyard Pool Ch. 03'

Where is parts 4 and 5? Love the story!!!

Good, as always, but why do you keep delaying the inevitable?

How's about a "to be cont'd" and/or a "the end" so we know. I rarely start multi part stories till I know they're finished. Too many abandoned stories or stories with chapters so far apart I have to reread the previous part to remember what's going on out there.

Thanks

We seem to be in a holding pattern here, with pretty much the same thing happening as did in the second installment. Have them seal the deal (after Amy’s done freaking out after having her hymen broken), let Mom discover what’s been going on and to suprisingly condone it, and hea* it to its conclusion.

Marvin

*happily ever after

Oh, you tease! Hopefully our young lovers aren't discovered, especially as things are heating up nicely.

Love it, looking forward to more.

Love this amazing story, any more parts coming?

Please continue with the story

SILVERBEARD69 Please continue with the story

I liked it but, there's zero conflict in evidence, not internal or external and that makes the story feel disingenuous.

I'm confused, was there soap involved in the shower? I couldn't tell from the 50 times you referred to everything as "soapy."

Great story

Ready for the next step. PENETRATION!!!!

Who’s at the front door?

What happened to chapter 4? It's not showing up anymore.

What happened chapter 4

Where is chapter 4 it was up now it’s disappeared?

Please finish this story.

i enjoyed this story! You made me very hard!

You have already used every possible adjective for dick sucking. It’s to the point of being boring and I am skipping hunks of text now because i have already read it five damn times.

So dangerous and hot. Wonderful