All Comments on 'Bad Girl's Present'

I don't think someone born in 1964 (18 in 1982) would have been named Ashley.

yes, I always listen to reviewers who comment about names when they leave anon comments!

I just took it to be what is was. Correct detail probably does help, but not critical in my own humble opinion

The story could use some editing. The concept is solid, but there are some continuity gaps. For example, read right before the first "Ashley".

not very christmassy

Sounds like a fun holiday season.

A compelling tale for Christmas. I liked it, although it could have used some elaboration. It was a bit short and needed some extra sizzle to spark it up.

Christmas and Succubi do not go together. This should have been a Halloween tale. 1/5

A mention, or two, of the word Christmas, does not a Christmas story make... So 2- STARS only for the contest.. That being said, I liked the concept of the tall, skinny, teen with A cup tits, as sexual servant... The magic transition to H cup was an unnecessary and ridiculous addition. Jus' sayin'