All Comments on 'Bad Karma'

Good story idea. Nice flow, though I think you needed to stretch out the middles of the sex scene and extended it. Say after she has ridded him, have her slide up and make him clean her pussy of his juices while sucks his cock till they both cum again. Then fade it to black and then continue with what you wrote for the morning.

Thanks for the input. I be appreciate your taking the time.