All Comments on 'Bad Magic Ch. 02'

Yawn....oh well, the first 1/4 page was good. Send up a flare after the new year when you’ve got a couple pages strung together

See ya

I avoided comment until I got to incarnation . . . I believe a book, such as this would have had an incantation . . .

There are a few other blips that a reading aloud might locate. I have seen a suggestion that you record your story then listen to the words as written. Good suggestion (not originally mine) to help identify the blips.

Look out Indian na Jones. . .

Pretty good but it wouldn't hurt wait until you have more before posting.

Amazing and pretty funny.