All Comments on 'Bad Magic Ch. 03'

Please continue!!!

great stuff, but longer chapters would be better!

More!

Uh oh! More schoolboy howlers! I've been trying to visualise taking a bar of soup into a shower. Not entirely sure that I like the idea except that with my appetite, a snack, even watered downmight be appreciated.

And you took the whole hull with you? Keel and all I guess? You should have hauled it into the changing area where it might have changed back into a bar of soap.

Sorry - the laughs keep coming but fortunately the storyline is becoming good enough to overrule these errors. Looks as if it continues to improve - well done.