All Comments on 'Bailee’s Punishment Ch. 01'

As a story this is fine. But bdsm it is not. Whether you practice RACK or SSC, the common theme of bdsm is CONSENT. Which the discerning reader may have noticed is absolutely absent from this story.

Interesting idea, hope Bailee would be punished harshly in prison, I can't wait to read about her first whipping.

Like the possibilities opened by this scenario. Here are a couple of ideas for plot lines that might develop. You should follow your own wishes for the story.

Bailee’s sentence could have been slightly longer, say 5 months, which would put her into the “Permanent Depilatory Public Program,” which requires her to be nude in public. Add a couple of sadistic guards who love to leave marks whenever they use a whip or cane. Maybe Bailee talks her way into an extension, the puts her in the “Unrepentant Criminal” category and perhaps earns her a brand or tattoo.

Looking forward to reading the subsequent chapters.

Stupid plot.

As a prison story featuring innocent women experiencing harsh treatment, it's pretty good. It shouldn't have the BDSM tag though, it should def be under non-con/reluctance.