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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

part 2?

Danno_61455Danno_61455almost 4 years ago

Just an average telling. Execution of the sex was fine. The path to their becoming lovers was lacking details on relationship building and seemed a rush to completion.

Thanks for sharing

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffalmost 4 years ago

Very, very disappointed! No chocolate syrup to go with the whipped cream!!!! Great story.

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