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lpacphantomlpacphantom5 months ago

Way way way too much perspective switching. If you want to get that many character's perspectives in the same story, you need to not write in 1st person.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very difficult to read.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Love this first chapter! Please do continue! 5stars

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Hi I'm Kaylee. I'm a 25 year old trans woman. I've been on hormones for almost 4 years. I've been writing tg fiction for a while, but usually just for my own pleasure. Thought I would share.

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