All Comments on 'Balcony View'

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 2 years ago

A great story about lust and cheating in a family without Puritan morals. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice story, maybe a sequel?

Silenus636Silenus636over 1 year ago

A good story is about the ability to suspend disbelief. Credibility is the coin of the realm. And yes, I find it even works with this one. (A little polishing might have helped, but it still stands.) For Life can be complicated at times, no? And what stage of a relationship doesn't experience a disingenuous phase? Yes, a story line here that could be expanded upon.

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